I attached my rough draft/brainstorm sheet for my infographic! I have found a lot of sources and took some notes but I need to organize it and pick out the most important pieces. I created my own template on canva and I made a tentative title. I am nervous all my information will not fit. Let me know what you think! 🙂
A solid start here, Joanna–please take a look at the email I sent you for some more comments.
Hi Joanna,
First I absolutely love the template that you designed! I think that it is eye catching and I love the first line of text that you have. You also have a lot of good information but I see your concern that it might not all fit. Something that I found in a lot of my research was that some of my sources had overlapping ideas. I was able to combine a lot of my notes from one source with notes from another. I think that that would maybe be a good place to start to try to concies some of your information. I hope this is helpful and look forward to seeing how your infographic comes out!!
Hi Joanna!
I really like the detail in this flier! I think the colors drew my attention and after that the title really made me want to read more of it. I like that you know exactly what you want to make sure to include in your final flier. Like Zoe mentioned, I think you can definitely find away to group the points which have a similar ideas. For instance you may be able to shorten the list of examples you have. The first two say”Repeated comments of an employees appearance, commenting on the attractiveness of others in front of an employee. I think you could combine this by saying “repeated comments on the appearance of an employee or others” Or something along those lines.