In doing my final research project, I decided to focus on the areas of diversity in education and also the bias that teachers/instructors have towards students who are ethnic minorities. There were many different options for sources to pick for this kind of project, but I wanted to key in on what the concept of implicit bias/complicit theories of intelligence were, and how the students are affected (their academic performance) in the classroom. I learned the critical thinking skills to not just take everything that I see as a useful source- that there are some instances where I have to let some things go, because while they may be useful in one context, they didn’t necessarily fit with what I wanted my narrative to be.
In doing this research I learned quite a bit about the whole process: first and foremost was the different styles of writing and using rhetorical situations depending on who my intended audience is and what I wanted my message to be. Using certain words to grab attention, and adjusting the length of my writing (my audience was high school students/young undergrads) to not turn their attention spans off by writing a twenty page essay. Also, keeping my audience in mind, I wanted to try to make this conversational but also academic, so it wasn’t just like me having a casual talk with someone where i’m just spouting things from my mouth. I wanted to have sources and examples that justified why I was writing what I was. The receiving of feedback from my fellow students was important in two ways: one, was to see what they were choosing to focus on while they were doing their work, and what they thought of mine, and also to get a gauge of what people in that population had to say, so I can get an idea of what changes I should make. The feedback I received from my instructor was also really valuable, as she gave me a good outline on how I should craft my final work and not have it be an unorganized mess, she gave me a more concrete idea of what I needed to focus on to make it the best I was able to.
What I am taking away from this assignment is that there are so many options that a writer has when it comes to saying what they want to say- using rhetoric to tinker your message and make it more digestible to your intended audience. Before this, I didn’t really think about this process much at all, I would just write what comes to mind and basically hope for the best. Now that I have these tools to really make any writing I do in the future much more polished I am feeling confident. Another lesson I will take from this in general comes from the assigned text we read in class, the concept of using templates to get an idea going if you are ever stuck in your writing. I will definitely remember to use this as I think it’s a really valuable tool to have.