Unit 3 Draft

For my project I decided to create an editorial ‘magazine’ that I’d imagine being published in an academic/ university setting. What I have currently is a very rough draft basically ‘free-designing’ where my main text, key headlines, and graphic content would go. The idea here is to create a hierarchy of information for my audience to quickly visualize and understand the message I’m trying to deliver (seen in the title of my project). I’m also aiming to follow the same narrative voice both news articles I found last week (see last discussion post below) by hybridizing the two and including mixed-media sources. The purpose of me posting on ISSUU (web platform) is so that this piece is available to the public which is generally catered for students and creative publications. As such, those interested in learning about getting a bigger idea of language, diversity, and the value it can bring to organizational settings (like the benefit of students familiarizing themselves with this as a means to increase employment opportunities in the workplace) would read on under these circumstances.

 

Week of 7/27 – Discussion

Rough Draft of Project

My final project is going to center around the importance of Universal Design and the importance of accessibility. I decided to use a blog site as I felt as though my target audience would rely on media outlets like such for news information and other stories. I am still working out the kinks of the blog, however this is the rough draft. I decided to incorporate the importance of organizational culture in the workplace as something that facilitates universal design and an inclusive working environment.

Rough Draft

 

Mike – Draft Presentation – 7/31

Kavanagh_Draft Presentation_WRT205_Summer2020

Well, it seems that my plan to share a PowerPoint deck hit a big snag when I discovered that it’s impossible to do so on the blog due to “security concerns.” While I figure out a workaround, please enjoy the PDF’d version of the presentation. Not nearly as exciting, but hopefully you’ll get the gist.

As I’ve mentioned previously, my imagined scenario is me in a conference room with a handful of executives attempting to convince them of the importance of corporate responsibility. I’ll do this by demonstrating the relationship between consumers and the market.

In the finished version, I plan on recording my voice as I go through the presentation so you can get a better sense of what it would be like to be in the “audience”. However, lost in the conversion from .pptx to .pdf are the draft “speaker’s notes” that I had included. These are not fully formed, but I’ve included them below in an attempt to provide some insight into my current thinking. Thanks to everyone in advance for your input and help!

“Speaker’s Notes”

Slide Two:  “There is a long history of consumer activism in the United States…”

Slide Three:  “In the 1830s, the Quaker community of Philadelphia and Wilmington, DE began to establish markets which sold produce and other goods not sourced from slave labor….”

Slide Four:  “Let’s fast forward nearly 200 years to the present. Walmart & Target have essentially the same business model, but attract a very different cliental…”

Slide Five: “How did this happen? Well, according toJessica Stewart’s essay from Shopping For Change….”

Slide Six:  “Increasingly, citizens are engaging less with the traditional political process, and voting with their pocketbooks. According to Caroline Heldman in her book Protest Politics in the Marketplace: Consumer Activism in the Corporate Age …”

Slide Seven:  “An example of a company who have been quite public about their own activism is Ben & Jerry’s. Not only have they created special-edition ice cream flavors to promote causes of equality and social justice…. (cite https://www.chuckjoe.co/how-ben-and-jerrys-incorporates-social-responsibility-through-conscious-capitalism/)

Slide Eight:  ”Core to this concept is the creation of clear mission statement. An effective mission statement will….”

Slide Nine:  “Navigating this path will not always be easy. Nike decided to publicly support the Black Lives Matter movement, however, accusations of underpaid staff in Asia working in “sweatshops” threatened to undermine the message.”

Slide Ten: ”Regardless, it is worth the risk. Consumers have more choices than at any other point in history. Surveys demonstrate….cite Cone Comms/Echo Research re: chart)”

Rough Draft

This social media infographic would ultimately catch the attention of those who are not educated on the discrimination faced within the workplace for those who are part of the LGBTQ community. I would want the post to primarily be showing the statistics in a visual format that would captivate an audience of people. These posts could be shared around, spread through social media, as more become aware of the predicament our society is in. The primary purpose is to educate those who are not too familiar with this said discrimination, either they do not see it or do not fall victim to it.

Draft, Aaron

*I apologize first off for the quality of my work lately, I have been really sick the last couple of days* My draft is linked at the bottom of this, and I promise that the final project will be much more worthy and complete.

 

My final project is going to be dealing with the effects of bias in education-is it really prevalent, how much of an effect does it have on educational outcomes (student performance)? My intended audience is students in high school and university level who may be enrolled in a course just like this. The sources I am using are academic in style but not too heavy on the language, so a lay person could understand them quite easily. The style of my final project will be a straightforward research article (with the possibility of incorporating a graphic or two) but it will be written in the traditional style that we are all accustomed to.

 

Draft

Draft, Isaac Haseltine, PDF link

FINAL DRAFT

The main question I have for you guys: Do the charts and quote help you get a deeper understanding of what Im writing? I want them to speak for themselves in a way, where I don’t have to necessarily mention them in the writing, but they play an important role in the transitioning of subtopics. Thanks!

Unit 3 Project Draft – Dominique Van Gilst

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1XWyQvhRiTjKvf0hQSCBa19RW5-tdwSbqIcrVuBnlxQg/edit#slide=id.g35f391192_00

The audience of my project are parents/guardians who have children going into inclusive classrooms. In this scenario, I am the teacher of an elementary school classroom, and the parents/guardians have come to the school for a back to school night type thing where instead of it being back to school night, it is something that would happen before school starts. The purpose of this project is to help the audience understand the power of inclusion, and why it will be beneficial to their child. I have added voice overs to make this presentation as realistic as possible.

 

Audience, audience, audience

Know the 3 most important factors in real estate? Location, location, location.

Well, for writing, it’s audience.

Take a look at the rubric for your Unit 3 project, and you’ll see this come up again and again–note how many of these items hinge on textual features that are appropriate to the audience. That’s why you need to have a very clear picture of who your audience is, so that you can better assess what they will need and expect from you, so that you can deliver.

Presenting your research in an audience-appropriate fashion is the critical to the success of your communication. You might have terrific information and important new ideas to share, but if you can’t make them land with your audience, there’s little point in you writing in the first place.

That’s why we’ve spent the last couple of weeks looking at texts that weren’t scholarly articles or straightforward academic-style essays. Those genres work really well for certain audiences and purposes–to communicate cutting-edge new ideas to other people with some background knowledge/expertise in the field–but they don’t work well for everybody all the time. We depend upon other genres to communicate in other situations.

And that’s why I’ve asked you to get pretty specific in setting forth the rhetorical situation that you’ve conjured for this text you’re creating. In order to understand and evaluate your work, your readers need to know just who you’re aiming to reach and under what circumstances. (Make sure that you include a brief note explaining all this in the body of your draft post, due by the end of the day on Friday, 7/31).

It’s worth reviewing some of the myriad ways in which audience matters

Decisions about audience and purpose are intrinsically connected–it wouldn’t make sense to provide general knowledge background to people who are already experts, nor would it make sense to lobby entry-level workers for policy change (since they’re not the ones who make those decisions). Your audience and your objective need to be tightly and logically connected.

Your audience dictates various writing choices–how long will you be likely to have your readers’ attention? how much specialized jargon can you use? how much background information will you need to provide? what’s an effective level of detail? what kinds of examples will they be most interested in? what source information will your readers expect to have for their own follow-up? what kind of relationship will you seek to establish with them?

Knowing your audience lets you shape your text to be functional for them–in terms of level of formality, voice, use of graphics/media, visual organization of the text, incorporation of external links, etc.

 

Crediting your sources

One of the challenges of writing in non-academic styles is that your academic citation skills might need to flex a bit–in-text parenthetical citations and footnotes simply aren’t appropriate to all genres, but you are still ethically bound to provide information about your sources to your readers.

So how do you do this??

This is one of the reasons I’ve asked you to look for sample texts in the genre you plan to write. In reviewing those samples, please pay attention to how the authors handle sources–do they provide a list of references at the end? (and perhaps numbered footnotes throughout?) do they hyperlink to other articles they’re working with? do they rely on in-text attribution (the sort of “according to X….” phrases)?

There are some formats (i.e. PowerPoint) where fairly traditional academic-style footnotes are still the order of the day. In most cases, though, in these non-academic genres, you’ll see embedded links and in-text attribution as the norm. You need to look closely at some samples to see how authors handle it in these media outlets, and then act accordingly.

Why is this so important?

Well, this is a research course, after all, so we need to approach the particulars of citing research carefully, but this isn’t just some check-off on an assignment. Research-based writing lives and breathes beyond the university, too, so you’ll need to have a variety of tools at your disposal to employ in these situations. You probably won’t be using MLA or APA-style forever, but you will be researching and sharing what you’ve learned for the rest of your career.

It’s also worth considering the ethical implications, which run in two directions. You have an obligation to the authors of the sources you are working with to provide credit where credit is due. Furthermore, you have an obligation to your readers, who need to have ready access to the sources you’ve been using for their own purposes. You’re part of a larger discussion around your issue, remember, and that means that you need to honor those whose work you’re building upon, as well as facilitate those who will want to do more with this topic once you’re done with it.

Note that (as indicated in the assignment rubric on the unit 3 assignment sheet) you have 2 responsibilities–to provide in-text attribution of sources that you are relying upon in building your argument and providing a separate complete bibliography for the sources that have helped to shape your thinking (even if you have not quoted, paraphrased, or cited them in your actual text).

Because this work of figuring out how to cite your sources matters so much, please be sure to integrate these credits into your draft, so that I can give you some feedback on how well it’s working and what adjustments you might need to make. If you have any questions as you’re working, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

 

Project Proposal

For my project I would like to create a visual presentation tailored for companies and schools that could use improvement on their guidelines regarding minority students. So many environments lack the proper knowledge on how to elevate and incorporate the minority individuals and fail to make these communities supportive towards their success. With my presentation I would provide a list of ways to incorporate minority voices and use their backgrounds and individual skills as valuable assets. I would make them more aware of how to make each space more friendly and what actions should be taken when a minority feels misrepresented or undervalued in the workplace. In a school environment I would provide methods on how to forgo racial profiling and stereotypes against minority students. New methods should be laid out for recruiting minority students into the gifted programs and they should feel encouraged, not deterred from completing school.  Minority students should be challenged to succeed in school and they should have more resources for reaching out to individuals when they feel they are being discriminated against. I did some research on companies that provide learning opportunities to minorities with specific interests and I feel incorporating some of that into my project will provide establishments with organizations tailored towards minority success.