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In the reading, Cori Wong brought up several proposals that would promote inclusivity,equity and diversity in the a workplace. One contribution that she has made which stood out to me in particular can be found on page 2 under the section “Starting With Better Questions”. Wong states ” Asking ‘Who else could we bring on board?’ risks tokenizing different identities by treating diversity as merely a numbers issue”. As Wong further expanded on this statement it became more apparent the message that she was trying to convey was. Wong explains that this question essentially makes it seem as though an organization can increase their diversity if they bring in more people from marginalized groups. Wong then further explains that what these organizations should be doing is focusing on making the environment more inclusive so that these people can have a better chance at being successful. To rectify this, Wong suggests that organizations focus on the question of “Who is not represented at the proverbial table?” as a way to uncover and examine any aspects of the organization’s culture which may be excluding some people, and focus on fixing this. I think this stood out to me because it relates to what I’ve been researching for the past week , I think this has given me some better insight into the difference between diversity and inclusion as well as the effect when one is present without the other.
2) In Wongs writing, I noticed that she connected her paragraphs by using “while”,”for example”, or referencing something that was brought up in the previous paragraph to show that they are connected. This is seen on the first page under “Context:Social Inequities and Organizational Culture” when she begins the first paragraph by mentioning that workplaces reflect inequities that are found at larger scale in the culture. Wong connects the next paragraph by stating ” for example, gaps in pay equity among men a women are the result of gender bias…”. She provided an example of what she mentioned in paragraph 1. this is also seen on page 2 when Wong writes in the previous paragraph about the meaning of diversity and then in to connect the next paragraph she states ” While diversity often refers to representation of culture, inclusion refers to …”. I think her transitions matter greatly in her piece because it shows that her writing is very put together and organized.
My highlight last week was that I finished my calculus course after six stressful weeks, another highlight was yesterday when I went to New Jersey and hung out with some of my family to celebrate Eid.