Question 1 Response
Now that I have read everyone’s expanding the canon posts, I’ve gained a deeper understanding of inclusion and what it means to be diverse. Each post offered an alternate perspective into different forms of diversity/inclusion and altered my viewpoints on the lives of different groups of people. I liked reading Caitlin’s post because it included firsthand examples of women in the police force and their experiences while working. Kaitlyn mentioned that spreading awareness is a key aspect of bring about change with respect to workplace diversity. I like this idea in particular because it resonated well with my own writing, being that we both referenced articles that did not provide clear solutions but instead insisted on promoting awareness that would then lead to the effective result. I also really liked her choice of incorporating facts and statistics through the use of a Ted talk rather than direct quotation. This made her writing seems more personable while still providing strong evidence for her topic.
Question 3 Response
Bogost’s writing seemed to flow seamlessly despite covering a range of ideas related to technology and diversity. Each paragraph served as a segway from the current idea to the next. The paragraph that demonstrates this flow of ideas the best is the 14th paragraph in which Bogos states “But integration is much harder than diversity. Isbell thinks that two separate conditions need to be met in order to accomplish it: “One is that the new folks are both capable and confident. The other is that the old folks are willing.” This paragraph although brief, sets up the stage for the “problem” of the article. By clearly outlining the conditions that need to be made in order to see effective change in the tech industry, Bogos not only transitions into how to each of these criteria can be met but he also provides sound evidence from research and strategy specialists at Google. As a collective, the paragraphs in “The Problem With Diversity in Computing” support each other by working as a collective to spread awareness about the what diversity in tech should/could look like.